A few weeks ago, I recorded a podcast episode about Jonah Sachs’s book Winning the Story Wars. He had a particularly useful observation about three story elements that pull in audience attention. He calls them Freaks, Cheats, and Familiars.
Sachs explains how these elements can be deployed, like the Hero’s Journey, to make stories much more memorable and engaging.
As I was reading Story Wars, it struck me that there’s a well-known figure who illustrates all three of these elements in one person: legendary bodybuilder, action star, two-term California Governor, and crafter of potent analogies, Arnold Schwarzenegger.
Here’s how it works:
Remember when we talked about not being so damned boring?
Sameness is boring. Conformity is boring. You break the brutal cycle of boring by being different.
Sachs’s freaks are story characters who compel our attention because they are different. They might be particularly tall or short, particularly handsome or ugly, or physically distinctive in some other way.
They also might be quite normal-looking people who stand out because they’re in a particular context. Normally we wouldn’t call Justin Trudeau a freak, but he’s almost bizarrely good-looking for a head of state. I’m a quite ordinary-looking person, but my pink hair stands out, particularly in a business context — and it becomes a freak element that people remember.
Schwarzenegger, of course, achieved freak status with his remarkable physique. To this day, he’s one of the most influential figures in bodybuilding history, with five Mr. Universe and seven Mr. Olympia wins.
But there are lots of bodybuilders. I’d argue that it’s Schwarzenegger’s strong Austrian accent that helps make him instantly memorable. That combination — the massive physique with the specific accent — creates a kind of “sketch” of him in our minds, even if we haven’t seen him often.
Freaks make great characters because they have good hooks to make them stick in our minds. A voice, a walk, a scar, a costume. Note that “freak” in this case isn’t pejorative and doesn’t imply that there’s something wrong with the person’s appearance.
One way to determine if you have a freak: if you saw them drawn in a graphic novel, with minimal context, would you recognize them?
Other memorable freaks, from both stories and real life, include:
- Darth Vader
- Dennis Rodman
- The Joker
- Charlie Chaplin
- Carrot Top
- David Bowie
Sachs’s second engrossing element is the cheat.
These are characters who cheat the system — who violate some social norm. They embody the trickster archetype and are notable in that they can be either a hero or a villain. (A few, like the Norse god Loki, manage to be both.)
Good cheats challenge corrupt social norms and undermine them. Martin Luther King, Jr. was a cheat in this sense. So are all those detectives in novels who just can’t seem to follow the rules.
Bad cheats are the ones who undermine the social rules we value. Liars, thieves, betrayers of trust.
Cheats bring massive energy to a story. When we find out that someone is breaking the rules, we’re almost compelled to find out more … and to figure out if this is a brave visionary or a dangerous crook.
Schwarzenegger’s reputation as a trickster started with the documentary Pumping Iron, which showed him cleverly tricking his opponents into sabotaging themselves. His 2003 run for Governor of California revolved around breaking the “business as usual” political norms that voters found boring and unsatisfying.
Whether he was a “good” or a “bad” cheat in that context depended on your politics — but he did manage to win the governorship for two terms. (His opponent, Gray Davis, was a politician whose name perfectly described his political charisma.)
Schwarzenegger continues to bend the political “rules,” as a prominent Republican voice urging action on climate change.
Other memorable cheats include:
- Han Solo
- Tim Ferriss
- Richard Nixon
- Bernie Madoff
- Iron Man
- Bugs Bunny
So … freaks and cheats are inherently interesting and memorable, but they aren’t inherently trustworthy.
Stories that motivate us to action need another element: familiarity.
If Schwarzenegger hadn’t been a celebrity, it’s hard to envision him as a successful candidate. People knew his name, his accent, and his penchant for thumbing his nose at the establishment. The first person to mimic his famous “Terminator” accent did so about five minutes after the premiere of The Terminator. (Note: I made that up, but you know it has to be true.)
Arnold Schwarzenegger was widely known, so his oddness seemed fairly safe. He helped things along by being willing to play with his own image. He was widely called “The Governator,” by his fans and critics alike. A typical politician couldn’t call the California state assembly “girly men,” but Schwarzenegger, riffing off of the Saturday Night Live parody of characters like him, pulled it off … because everyone understood the reference.
Stories that are populated only by freaks and cheats will feel unnerving. Familiars allow regular people — those who aren’t freaks and cheats — to feel at home in the story being told.
And sometimes, someone like Schwarzenegger with strong “freak and cheat” credentials becomes a familiar simply by virtue of being highly visible over a long period of time.
Familiar characters are relatable. They seem like “real people.” While they may have accomplished amazing things (they could even be freakish in their abilities), they also feel like someone we could know personally.
I’d argue that all of these folks have elements of the familiar:
- Luke Skywalker
- Captain America
- Peyton Manning
- Frodo Baggins
- Neil deGrasse Tyson
- The Bush family
The strongest stories will often include all three of these elements, but they don’t always come wrapped in the same character.
Schwarzenegger’s not the only one, though, by any means. Neo in The Matrix starts off as a mild-mannered Familiar, becomes an ultra-powerful Freak, and then evolves into the ultimate Cheat who sees through and disrupts the Matrix’s corrupt nature.
Tyrion in Game of Thrones is an obvious “Freak,” whose physical differences cause him untold pain. He’s a Cheat when he scoffs at the norms of his society and manages to talk his way out of situations that would kill off anyone else. And he plays the role of Familiar as one of the few characters who seems to show actual human feelings. (Game of Thrones makes extensive use of the three elements. Notice that two other triple-threat characters, Daenerys Targaryen and Jon Snow, stand out among a cast of ultra-vivid characters as particularly memorable.)
Most comedians also pull all three elements together. Louis C.K., like many comedians, has a speaking voice that’s immediately recognizable (Freak). He gets laughs by poking at social norms, sometimes brutally (Cheat). And he does it as an average-looking guy — digging deep into the psyche of “regular people” (Familiar).
Jonah Sachs didn’t make up “freaks, cheats, and familiars.” He just noticed how they worked to make many, many stories more memorable.
If you’re looking for ways to tell stories that resonate more deeply, that move your audience to action, and that are just plain interesting, give these a try. Don’t think you have to be a born storyteller. Storytelling is a craft, and it can be learned.
Ever use one (or all) of these elements in your content? Let us know in the comments!
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Reader Comments (13)
Fox Emerson says
I love that you just pinpointed something I couldn’t clarify myself, yet was loosely aware of.
Great blog as usual! Providing insightful and helpful advice which I imagine helps others as much as it does me.
Sonia Simone says
The Sachs book is full of interesting insights like that, I recommend it. 🙂
Debjyoti Ghosh says
Thanks for the fantastic picks. I would like to add Stieg Larsson’s Lisbeth Salander to the list of remarkable characters. Her story is as shaking as a Game of Thrones character.
I completely agree that the key to crafting high-impact timeless stories is hidden in creating extra-original characters with an intriguing backstory to tell, one that involves episodes of pain and suffering. Being in dark places is what actually makes characters strong and wise. Stories that depict deep personal dramas is what grabs readers by the throat and keeps them engaged til the end.
Thanks for the inspiring post!
Sonia Simone says
Lisbeth is a great example! Takes her some time to come into “Familiar,” but I agree, she gets there.
Thanks for your nice note. 🙂
Michael LaRocca says
Don’t be a girlyman — hire a proofreader.
No, that doesn’t work. I’m a long way from Schwarzenegger.
Sonia Simone says
Ha! Yeah, some things only work for Arnold. 😉
Charles Areson says
Great insights and good to know.
I laughed at freaks because I immediately thought of the character my teen daughter wrote in a story. Alto (Spanish for tall) is a dark-skinned dwarf (size not race) with the mind of Sherlock Holmes but looks more like a pint-sized Santa Claus. My thought was, “She hit the nail on the head.” Oh yes, she has the others too, but Alto stands out (no pun intended, but I will take it).
I will have to share this article with her
Sonia Simone says
Sounds promising! Giving your primary character an important “difference” is an old trick — because it works. 🙂 It gives us a mental hook to get a handle on the character, and it subtly shows us which character we’re supposed to pay attention to.
Srinivasa Chaitanya says
I am a non-native English speaker and trying to improve my writing Skills. I have been using story-telling strategy in my blog posts. Now, I will include these elements in my content and keep my readers more engaged.
Sonia Simone says
Best of luck with your writing!
Jane Rucker says
Thank you for the great post! I totally agree about storytelling–it’s learned. I believe that means we ALL can do it!
Sonia Simone says
Jitendra Vaswani says
writing an engaging blog is also an art. You should be always keep conversation moving ahead.
That’s why I focus on writing a reader friendly article and yes don’t copy others but learn their way and follow the same for your writing styles too.
Thanks for the Amazing post.
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