I always forget what synecdoche means because it sounds so fancy.
And because it sounds so fancy we should first cover how to pronounce the literary device:
sin-eck-duh-key
Good.
Now, here’s what it is:
Synecdoche is when a part of a noun is used to refer to the whole thing, or vice versa.
As you strengthen your writing skills, you start to notice things you didn’t see before.
When you look back at work you published years ago, you might find that:
- A word that originally felt perfect now seems inaccurate
- An example now seems too plain
- A supporting argument now seems off-topic
You might realize that you didn’t choose the right language to communicate your message. The more precise you can get, the more your reader will understand your point of view at that time.
Enter: Synecdoche
Synecdoche helps a reader understand your sensibilities, the feelings behind the words you write.
Instead of selecting the most obvious choice, you paint a detailed picture for your reader that makes your writing memorable.
One of the most common examples of synecdoche is using the word “wheels” to represent a car: “Have you seen Doug’s new wheels?”
Here are some other ones:
- “Threads” for clothing
- “Steel” for weapons
- “Sun salutations,” “down dog,” or “savasana” for yoga
These descriptive alternatives are subtle ways to shape your writing voice.
Synecdoche and metonymy
Synecdoche is a form of metonymy (mitt-on-uh-mee), just like simile is a form of metaphor.
Metonymy is when a specific term becomes shorthand for a general noun.
Some examples of metonymy include:
- “Hollywood” for the American film industry
- “The press” for journalists
- “Suits” for businesspeople
Synecdoche and metonymy will typically emerge after you’ve written a rough outline or draft to pepper your text with your personality.
Don’t accept the first words you write
You draft to figure out what you’re trying to say, but that doesn’t mean you have to accept the first words you write.
They very well might be the right words for your content — just don’t assume they are.
After you’ve clarified your thoughts, craft the exact experience you want your reader to have with your writing.
Reader Comments (5)
Nikola Webster says
Hi there,
Oh boy I have a lot to learn… today I just learned two new words synecdoche and metonymy – yikes! I do get the main point around word choice, I am in the process of reoptimizing some of my work and I am picking out new words. I also use the paid version of Grammarly which helps me out and often suggests alternatives.
Thanks for the education – Nikki
R.G. Ramsey says
I learned a new word today, okay two. The first one I thought was pronounced differently when I first saw it.
I have gone over old articles with the help of Prowritingaid and found many instances where a different word would have been better.
Proof reading for blog posts is something I get lazy with at times.
R.G. Ramsey
Jennifer says
Using these Synecdoches comes at the risk of having readers not understanding your meaning. Many people frequenting blogs don’t have English as their first languages and will be at a loss of what you mean
christian says
Wow, thanks for that. Trying to regularly write posts for my website is really mentally draining. Not being a natural writer, has made doing this a dreaded task! I really like the Synecdoche description. It has given me the idea that I need to find and use these types of words “wheels, Hollywood etc” , to strengthen the readability of my posts!
What a useful website.
Dave Shepherd says
My best performing emails have come from simply talking in my own voice rather than sound professional and boring. Totally agree, business talk is out and natural voice is in.
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