I know what some of you are thinking.
You’re asking:
“Do I really need a sales page anymore? Can’t I sell using social media/webinars/live events/blog posts/podcast episodes?”
I don’t know the details of your exact situation, but I will say this:
If you need to spell out the benefits of your product or service in order to make more sales (which you do), a sales page will drive more positive results for your business.
Unfortunately, writing sales pages has gotten a bit of a bad rap. Some people get wildly anxious when they sit down to write one. Or worse, they fill their sales pages with rambling copy that doesn’t persuade anyone to buy.
These days, I’ve developed a specialty as a sales page copywriter — so I wanted to give you three quick tips for improving your own sales pages.
But first, I want to tell you how I fell in love with writing them.
Why I love writing sales pages — and how you can learn to love them, too
About a year ago, I took Derek Halpern’s Sales Page That Converts course, which was a game-changer for me. I studied the course closely, and used that advice to craft sales pages for my next six clients.
As it turns out, I’ve got a knack for it. One page I wrote for a client resulted in a $70,000 launch. That one felt good, I gotta admit.
I’ve learned to love writing sales pages by doing it … a lot. I understand what my goals are and what I need to accomplish in each section. I know what questions to ask my clients. And I understand the writing process.
These days, sales pages are like giant puzzles that I get to put together.
You can learn to love writing sales pages, too — you just need practice.
I understand the struggles of facing a blank screen when you’re writing, so here are my three best pieces of advice to jump-start the process for you.
Tip #1: Thoroughly explain your offer
The most important thing any persuasive copy needs to do is give your prospects the information they need to make a decision.
That means you’ve got to clearly explain the features and benefits of a product or service, and why your product or service is different from your competition.
For example, if you’re selling hot air balloon rides, you’ll need to describe the features by explaining how long the ride will last, whether it’s appropriate for kids, the safety measures you employ, and what riders can expect on the big day.
Then you could show one of the benefits of your service by describing it as a potential gift for a loved one. If your prospect gave the ride as a once-in-a-lifetime gift to a spouse, you could describe the joy and gratitude on her face as they lift off into the air on a crisp autumn morning.
Or you could talk about how excited the prospect’s kids would be if they got to go for a balloon ride and how his kids would think he is the world’s greatest dad. You could mention that one of your balloons would be a wonderfully memorable place for a proposal!
You’ve also got to explain why your balloon rides are better (or different) from your competitor’s. Do you cater to people who have a fear of heights? Do you do Disney-themed rides that are perfect for kids? Do you provide longer balloon rides than anyone else in your area?
Whatever your product or service, don’t be afraid to spill all the beans and share all the juicy details of what the prospect gets, why it’s awesome, and why you’re the right choice.
Tip #2: Answer all of your prospects’ questions
One of the most important parts of a sales page is the “Frequently Asked Questions” section. This is the place where you get to address all of the nagging little questions on your prospects’ minds.
When many prospects ask questions about your product, what they really want to know is:
“Is this going to work for me?”
For example, let’s say you’re selling an online program that teaches people how to start their own online hot air balloon ride company.
When your prospect lands on your sales page, she’s going to have some concerns. Almost all potential customers do.
- If she’s a newbie entrepreneur, she’s worried she doesn’t have enough experience, and she’ll be completely lost in your program.
- If she has lots of experience with ballooning, she’s concerned there won’t be enough useful material in the program for her.
- If she’s from some far-flung corner of the world, she’s worried that the information in your program won’t apply to her, because the ballooning regulations may be different in her neck of the woods.
Your job is to address all of these concerns in your “Frequently Asked Questions” section.
Brainstorm every question you’ve ever been asked about your product or service, and then narrow down your list to the 10 most common questions. Next, write down your (honest) answers to those queries in your sales page’s FAQ.
You’re particularly looking for questions that stop people from buying. The better you are at addressing your prospect’s concerns, doubts, and objections, the more sales you’ll bring in.
Tip #3: Don’t be afraid of writing a long page
If you do everything I described in tips #1 and #2, you’ll need to use more than a couple of lines of copy. It’s just a fact.
Don’t fear the long-form sales page! If you need eight pages of copy to give your prospects everything they need to make a decision, so be it.
I promise — you’re not going to content marketing hell for writing a long sales page. (Actually, Copyblogger has always advised that you make your copy as long as it needs to be.)
That doesn’t mean you’ll fill your sales page with pointless fluff just to meet some imaginary word count requirement. Every word needs to count, and every phrase needs to pull your prospect closer to your desired action.
Longer copy sells because it provides all of the right information.
Your sales page can be one of your best business assets
When you write a high-conversion sales page, you create an “online salesperson” that can bring in sales for your business — month after month and year after year.
As you keep practicing, you’ll notice that one day, writing sales pages won’t be scary. Pretty soon, you might actually be crazy enough to enjoy writing them.
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Reader Comments (19)
Ben Sibley says
I like this approach. Outlining the product’s benefits is critical, but I think clarity comes first.
I find that many sales pages I visit, especially for apps/software, are too light on practical info. They have beautiful graphics, but I’m left visiting their user documentation to figure out the specifics I need to consider the purchase.
Beth Hayden says
Good point, Ben! People can’t buy if they don’t know (and/or have to hunt for) the specifics of the product.
Craig says
So many people afraid of writing a long page… when infact they work and it should be tested.
If it does the job, why would you not write a long page?!
At least give it a test
Beth Hayden says
I often have to convince my clients to invest in a long-form sales page. When I complete the page, most of them say, “I think it’s way too long, but I’m willing to try it out and see how it goes.” So far, they’ve always been delighted with the results. I’m not sure why people seem to hate them so much, but they really work.
Nazmul Hridoy says
“Longer copy sells because it provides all of the right information”
I just loved this line
Some marketers think brief description/ sales page is smart but I think the description should cover every necessary point.
it’s clear to me that long sales page is effective but, how long a product description should be? what a product description should cover?
Thanks
Beth Hayden says
Honestly, I’m not sure, Nazmul – it depends on where the product description is being published, whether you’ve been given a word limit, who your audience is, etc. I would imagine a lot of the same guidelines apply, though.
Gill Andrews says
Hi Beth,
Solid advice! My favorite is #3. I repeat it often to clients that ask me how many words long the copy that I wrote is 🙂
I would like to add one thing though:
A copy on your sales page can only do so much. If the people who land on your page are not your target audience, or if the page alone is not enough to make them trust your offer, the page won’t convert, regardless of how compelling and persuasive the copy is.
In some cases, for example, if you are a solopreneur in a saturated niche, it means you need to build an audience who knows, likes and trusts you before launching a product.
In other cases, if you are a bigger company, for example, it means making sure that you get quality traffic and don’t have a mismatch in expectations between your ad and your page.
Otherwise, great advice. I’ll make sure to pass it along.
Gill
Beth Hayden says
Couldn’t agree more, Gil – well said. I always hound my clients about this point! It’s never a good idea to try to launch an online product when you don’t have an audience.
Lisa says
Thanks Beth, this is solid advice for a noob like myself to lap up. I would love to see one in action, so do you have an example, or two, of a sales page that you have come across recently that you could share?
Beth Hayden says
Yes! I don’t know how long it will be up (because he’s in the middle of a promotion right now) but I recommend checking out Derek Halpern’s Blog That Converts sales page. https://socialtriggers.com/join/blogthatconverts/ Also: Look for anything by the Rainmaker Digital team, when they’re doing promotions!
Karolina says
Thank you Beth, geat read. What do you think about using your personal story to promote your offer? Can people relate to that or that’s not the right angle?
Beth Hayden says
Absolutely – if your personal story helps explain the benefits, etc. and/or would help to grab attention at the beginning of the sales page, I say go for it!
Brooks Rembert says
I LOVE writing sales letters. If I’m ever stuck, I just use Perry Belcher’s 21 point guide as a checklist and just go right from #1 to #21.
It’s a great rough draft, then I’ll just clean it up.
Valerie says
Hey, Beth,
First of all, a good read!
Writing a long page maybe is not my favourite thing, but in some cases, it could be beneficial. I would say, the length totally depends on the product. If you have a detailed description and it is interesting, yea why not. Make it long. And vice versa 😉
Cheers.
Deanna says
Sales pages are something I struggle with. When I first started blogging back in 2009 I actually seemed to have a knack for it. Now, for whatever reason, I struggle. So, I found these 3 key points to be very helpful and useful. Thanks for sharing!
Beth Hayden says
You’re welcome, Deanna! I’m glad they’re useful!
Amit Jain says
Thanks Beth. Great article.
‘Spill all the beans’ caught my attention. All this time, I have been following the policy of providing teaser and keep the best part to the end. But after reading this, I am thinking if I would be giving away too much before letting the potential client in the door.
Also, length of the sales page has always been conflicting w.r.t the product or service being offered. But got some excellent tips here.
Calum says
As you say, I think there is a mis-conception when it comes to the length of high-conversion copy. When it comes to this type of copy, you have to include adequate detail by thoroughly explaining yourself.
This was a really interesting read, Beth. Good job!
Beth Hayden says
Thanks, Calum! Glad it was helpful!
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